Tuesday, May 23, 2006

transference


the devil in my head

as infectious as gremlins

a bat of an eyelid

and its jumping in yours


i say i am angry with me

u hear i am angry with you

you ask again

no

the distance widens


you cant see a thing

eyelashes try to brush away

the darkness

till you realize

that its caused by your own hands


i leave you

and your hope

to fight the devil

who has now become yours

6 Comments:

At 10:12 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

It is not about the smooth transfer of the devil..
The devil has not only 'now become yours' but continues to reside in 'your head' as well.
It is the multiplication of the fight with the devil.

 
At 11:42 AM, Blogger nowheregirl said...

ah... so the devil has found another abode... and some more by now i guess...who decides when to stop the game...

 
At 2:21 PM, Blogger San said...

hmm interesting.

 
At 1:52 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

I think you should take up poetry for your debut as a writer....good poetry is intense, crisp, and richer on account of what's Not said; all these you have managed to do quite well in this posting!

 
At 8:57 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

"i say i am angry with me

u hear i am angry with you"

wowwww

kiki

 
At 11:52 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

U write realllllllllly well....

 

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